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Through The Sea Of Time
Chapter Three
Survival
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The Duo are laying on the sandy shore of the only known land in the Sea of Time.
Dart is staring up at the black and white sky, thinking of how to escape.
"Dart? I can sense something... Do you feel it?" Snow`s voice is quiet as she sits up and looks out over the horizon.
"Yes. I do aswell." He sits up, scanning the horizon for traces of danger, any sign that something is coming.
"I see something... Look! Over There!" Snow Points in the direction, fear in her voice as a look of pure horror appears.
Dart looks after seeing her terrified expression, and stands up.
"What is that?!" Dart yells
"It`s a Time Wave....!!" Snow recognizes it, and hugs Dart around his waist, tears forming in her eyes as she tries to hide her fear.
Dart looks down at her, and lifts her up, carrying the small petrified Riolu in his arms, he begins to run in the direction that the Wave is heading, so he may stay in-front of it.
The water in the sea of time is only shallow, below his knee`s, and he keeps on running.
"I`ll get us out of here, Snow, I will, Okay? I promise I`ll look after you once we get out of here! Just tell me how you got here, and lets see if we can`t find out way out like that!"
Dart says reassuringly to his only friend in this unknown world.
Snow smiles, before looking at the wave that has now enveloped and wiped the island out of existence.
"Hurry, Dart! It`s catching up!" Snow screams, and covers her eyes.
"No!!" Dart yells as the energy envelopes him and Snow, a bright light blinding him.
He feels himself weaken, he feels life drain from Snow, the pair being wiped from existence.
"No.. Snow... I won`t let you die!" Dart screams and power can be heard in his voice, his whole body suddenly burns brightly with a blue and purple flame, the the wave that is attacking him and Snow begins to go from it`s aqua color to a silver color, which stops in it`s tracks before a portal opens inside and goes over the two.
They`re taken back to the normal world outside of the Sea of Time, Snow is crying in Dart`s chest, being wary of the chest spike.
"You protected me... Why? You hardly know me..." Snow speaks through tears and quite cries.
"I... I don`t know. I just feel like.. Your important..." Dart speaks, sitting down on the ground. The flames left him a while ago.
Dart rises after Snow calms down and ends up falling asleep in his arms. he begins walking, not knowing what to do or where to go with Snow, whether he should leave her under a tree, or keep him with her.
He has so many choices. But He can`t decide, so he eventually gives in to his thoughts and takes him with her, hoping she knows about what happened to him, why he has this weird power, why he can talk to other pokemon, and what world he is in.
Dart sighs and looks up into the sky, it`s still dark, and it`s still raining, the torrent seemingly never-ending.
He walks until he spots a cave through the darkness, a small sanctuary from the weather.
Dart picks up the pace, getting closer when he hears a rustling in some bushes, which later turns out to be the wind, so he continues until he gets to the cave. He lays down in the back, clutching Snow so she may rest in warmth, and so he may know the only person he actually knows will still be there when he wakes up in the morning. The rain provides enough sound to block out his thoughts, which allows him to relax and drift off into a sheltered sleep.
YAY!!! CHAPTER TWO!
POINT OUT SPELLING MISTAKES! AND GRAMMER ISSUES!
:3
Well Guys, Here it is, Through The Sea Of Time, Chapter Three!
Hope you enjoy/enjoyed it!
And...
DO NOT STEAL!
POKEMON BELONGS TO GAME FREAK AND NINTENDO!
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing!! The action scenes are awesome!!! Keep up the exellent work!!!
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you Ripple!
Can`t wait to see what you come up with!!
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! I'll try to have mine up soon...
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
O_O RIPPLE?! ARE YOU STILL ONLINE!!
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Dang...I missed you...I should be on at around 8:45 p.m tonight, so I could see you then! (I think that's the right time...)
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh! Okay!
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I`ll be in chat!
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TheLucarioKid Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
Great job as usaul! ^^
I can't wait to find out what happened! The suspense is killing me!

As a side not, you said to point out spelling and grammar, the only one that I noticed is when you put, Keep him with her, but him and her should be swapped, other than that, it's great! ^^
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, Thanks, LK!
Oh, and yes, I see that mistake.
Thanks. :D
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