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OverFlow
By Ace...

Emotions are like an unending current which we all struggle against.
But sometimes, we dam them up, and hide them behind a fake smile.
A small defence, that never seems to fail.

But, On occasion.
Everything floods through, the rising torrent bashing against our control.
We lose to this, for it is inevitable.
No matter how long it may take.

Even if we throw up walls, and steel ourselves.
We all succumb to the OverFlow.
...
I`m not feeling too happy...
Poorly written,
Poorly done,
Poem.

Hope you enjoy...
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Writer
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"But sometimes, we dam them up, and hide them behind a fake smile.
A small defence, that never seems to fail."

I feel like this all of the time.....
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
.... Yeah....
So Do I....
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Writer
...
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Brawler001 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I think this is a well written, well done poem dude. It explains exactly how I feel almost all the time. Great job! :)
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TheLucarioKid Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
I think it's safe to say that we've all felt this way at one point or another.
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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Adore-able Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
i love this. matches me perfectly
hope you feel better <3
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. And feel free to use it if you wanna in your siggy or whatev's
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Adore-able Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
k, ty. and no problem cx
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
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Flashthehedgehog33 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...But when friends help you, you can stand in the overflow....And not be washed away....In the aftermath, things get washed away for new things to come from it....This is life and people forget that it's meant to be shared with others...

I'm happy that we sorted you out and helped you get up and stand in the overflow!

Sincerely,
Flash the Hedgehog , A.K.A Luke...
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