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For Once I see Clearly, the sky is bright and my mind is clear.
I see the bright world, the good and the bad, the light and the darkness.
I see hope and I see loss, a balance of perfect stability.
But the balance between the two is easily interrupted with so much as a weight on the scales.
Again I see nothing but the darkness in minds and the sky, waiting in a twirl of depression for light to shine again.
Not Bad, Eh?
I haven`t written anything poemy in a while... So I have!
I hope you all like it!
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negativesanchez98 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice man ^_^ I really like it!
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Shadowed22 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011
this is really good *smile a big grin and shakes head up and down*
its like a prophacy of some kind, sort of like something of alan wake
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Um... Alan Wake had no Poetry
Just alot of metaphors.
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Shadowed22 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011
you know what i meant, you know were what he reads comes true
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Um, no.
Only if that lake of evil wills it, will it become true. Not Everything. Just that.
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Shadowed22 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
oh ok
well i still dont get some of that game so sorry if i sounded like i was opposing your knowledge
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
XD Its okay
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cooldog144 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Not Bad *shakes head up and down slowly* Awesome job!
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Cooldog!
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cooldog144 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
No Problem :3
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Brawler001 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Student General Artist
This is just excellent. Your words give a meaning between the good and evil. It's like someone is being told their destiny or something to that matter. :D Awesome job dude! Keep up the great work! :iconsuperw00tplz:
Btw... check my latest journal and if you have a chance, some newer deviations I did. :)
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. ^_^
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Brawler001 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
okie see ya there!
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
MEET ME IN TEH CHATROOM
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Brawler001 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
I AM IN THE CHATROOM!!! :)
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ITS NOT LETTING ME CONNECT!!!
BECAUSE IM AT SCHOOL!!!
RAGE
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Brawler001 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
CRAP!!! Stupid school! Have fun today! :)
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
School Sucks >_>
Be online in two hours!!!!
AND WE WILL TALK THEN!!!
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TheLucarioKid Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
I didn't know that you did poetry.
I think that this is incredible, keep it up! ^^
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. ^_^
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TheLucarioKid Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
No problem! ^^
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:P
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like it! I'm not a huge fan of poetry, but this is probably one of the best pieces I've read in a long time. It sounds like the beginning or the climax of a hero's tale in my opinion, and it gave me some inspiration of how to make my third character for my Pokemon story. Great job and keep it up!
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Thanks, Ripplestar!
Wow, I gave you an.. Idea? I don`t think any of my works has done that before...
Thats... Awesome. :)
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I might need some help with it, though. Would you be willing to?
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Of Course. :)
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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oo0ace0oo Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I have a chatroom we can speak in if you wish.
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I just sent you a note, but after you read we can discuss the details if you want.
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